Saturday, 31 March 2018

Update: Age rating of our film

Our product was intended to be aimed at the age group of 15+ because our narrative was aimed at the age group who could understand and handle how bullying can lead to serious damage in a person. We also did not want to encourage any of the dangerous actions in our film, therefore our film idea was initially suitable as a 15 rated film. However, with some research on the BBFC website to clarify our thoughts on which age rating it should be, we found that because we have a small scene of the knife inserting the bully, it should be changed to an 18 rated film as people under this age would not be able to tolerate the violence of this scene. If it was to be released to a younger audience, they would potentially be hypodermically injected with thoughts of violence and may carry out the same procedure. This is shown in a real life example of the case of the two boys who killed the 2 year old Jamie Bulger after watching the horror movie 'Child's play 3'. They committed a copycat crime of copying the exact actions that took place in the movie, such as throwing the brick and taking the toddler to a train track. Whilst watching this movie, it lead to the feeling of desensitisation in the boys as they were desensitised to violence and so did not feel any remorse whilst killing the toddler.
We feel that our film is rated 18 instead of 15 because younger audiences may not understand the meaning behind Mila's revenge.

After an email sent to the BBFC by myself, they had confirmed that if our film was to be published then it would be an 18 rated film because of the stabbing scene.
 (click on the image for a larger view)

After Jacob's email, I decided to check the links he had provided me and found this (the following image) in relation to our product:

This made me have a better feeling about our product being an 18 rated film rather than a 15 rated film as our film have scenes of violence in it. Although I was slightly in a confused state and waited for the education team from the BBFC to respond to me.





As I waited, I researched other 15 rates horror films and shows and found that the show 'Black Mirror' Season 3, episode 5 had a similar scene to ours; there as a short clip of the soldier stabbing a person and it showed the process of the knife going in and out of the body like in our horror film.

Therefore we decided to keep the age rating as '15' as we believe that our content is not as violent as for example the content in the horror film 'SAW'. Furthermore, in our narrative, Mila continuously takes anti-depressant pills . If we showed her to be obsessed with these and continuously take them then it may have been an 18 rated film.

Tuesday, 27 March 2018

Audience feedback for dry-cut edit of our horror film

Update on our thought process: We are going to add a scene where there is psychiatrist (not shown) talking to Mila, asking her questions and then having Mila argue with herself. This is to clarify that there are two identities in one character as our audience at first did not understand that the main character, Mila, had a pseudo identity, and one that was bad and one that was good. To clarify this, and also her reason to kill her bullies, there will be a psychiatrist asking her about how her bullying is going and if she is feeling okay. During this, both the identities will be talking to each other and then the bad one will disappear off to make it seem like she is in her head.

This is similar to my textual analysis on the short psychological horror film 'P.S.' as there is a doctor / psychologist asking the main character personal questions, which allows us as the audience to gain an insight into what's happening in the character's life.

Thursday, 15 March 2018

post production / production of poster

open new blank page
upload both final images to photoshop cs6
upload backgeround image of the trees
usemove tool to make it bigger and spread it out on the page

Mariam cropped out the green  screen using the magic wand tool for both images and drag them to the centre.
I then used the magic wand tool and zoomed into the pictures until all I saw was big pixels and removed the remaining green colour which gave the current pictures the fresh 'on its own' look.
Mariam used the 'Move tool' to resize the image and made it slightly bigger.
I copied the layers of the images 2 times and change the opacity and colour overlay by right clicking on the layer, pressing blending options and adjusting what is needed. I chose the colours from the colour scales, so one copied layer was red and one was green for both images. I piled them on top of each other with about half a cm apart from the beginning of the colours. I brought the layers to the back by dragging the layers to the bottom on the right hand panel. the main normal image was in the front. This created my hallucination look.
download fonts 'cabanyalZ' and 'who told satan' from dafont.com.
CabanyalZ used for title and 'coming soon', November 16th'.
'who told satan' font for actors real names, tagline and 'a dark arts production film'
used the move tool all to postiiton them
used the magic wand tool to take out the white bits in my logo design when I placed it on the page. Then I used the 'styles' page on the right to change the colour to a greyish green.
I then uploaded the 15 rated film logo and place on top left using move tool.

Changes from the feedback of the poster:
I used another picture of Bushrah and placed her in the middle of her two identities.
I changed the hue of the background using the blur and saturation tools to make it a dark red / brown background and used the blur tool to blur the trees in order to make the characters stand out.
The tagline font was changed to Time New Roman to make it more understandable and less comical. I also added a gradient effect to the font as grey and white but then was changed by Mariam and Noshin to a deep red and white due to further audience feedback.
I added the drips of blood on the second 'S' of the title using the stamp tool to make it look like there is blood dripping from that one letter 'S'.
I duplicated the layers of both the characters on the left and right twice to change the colour of the hoodies to deep green and red whilst keeping their faces cropped on top.
Mariam finished off the poster with adding a quote on the top of the poster: 'All monsters are human'.
I downloaded the font 'Universal Credits' from Dafont.com and used this for the credits in our movie at the bottom of the poster.
I used the pipet too to match the blood colour to the font and to match it with the same colour as the gradient red on the tagline and red hoodie.

Finally, to make sure that everything would be printed out correctly like the industry would do it, we moved around the imaged after enabling the grid lines and we made sure there were at east 2 bars of spaces between the texts and images.

Wednesday, 28 February 2018

Draft poster 3

Based on the feedback we received, this was the outcome of the next draft poster (shown below).
We had changed the fonts, added another image and also used the grid to put everything in place.
Further feedback for this poster was:
- To change the colour of the background in order to stick to the colour scheme.
- To change the colours of the hoodies.
- To add blood droplets on the title to make it look more like a horror film poster.
- To add a quote on top of the poster.
- To move the images and typography further down.
  

Wednesday, 21 February 2018

Draft poster 2

This was our draft poster 2.

The feedback we received:
-Change the font.
-Make the poster portrait as it would look better.
-Move the production logo and certification logos to the bottom.



Friday, 16 February 2018

Technical Feedback From Undergraduates


We showed our work to undergraduates studying Media related studies and they gave us very useful and important feedback to make our poster better.

What we will do to improve the poster:
- Use the grid to make sure everything fits perfectly.
- Move the characters more towards the left.
- Change the fonts
- Add drips of blood
- Move both the age certification and the production logo to the bottom
- Maybe move the 'coming soon' to the bottom or delete it as a whole.
- All the others listed for improvement.

Saturday, 6 January 2018

Filters in the production of our horror film

I learned to use different transitions and filters in  Final Cut Pro X during the production of my horror film.
In order to show that our main character, Mila, is suffering from DID and depression, we filmed scenes where she is running to take her anti-depressant pills.
When I was editing this, I added the 'prism' filter and 'earthquake' filter on top of the footage to make it look like the footage is shaking and distorted. This is to show how Mila feels before she takes her anti-depressants, as they calm her down after she takes them. In order to show how she calms down, I used the 'cross dissolve' transition and elongated it to the whole footage so it looks like the prism and earthquake effect calm down as she swallows the water with her pills.

I also used the titles 'Fade' and 'Glow' when Mila received texts from people. This was influenced from the television show 'Hollyoaks' as when the characters receive texts, a white text shows up on the screen when they check their phones. This was a good contingency plan as our original idea was to show the actual screen of the phone, but when we started recording, there were coloured lines and fuzzing on the phone screen. This is also a better way for our target audience to read the texts and understand the narrative.

When editing the news reporter's scenes, I added the news filters on top of the footage and entered scrolling text which went to the left to create verisimilitude as the news in real life has this, such as BBC and Sky News. I also added a logo of the news company on the top right of the screen and the pictures of the victims as they would be shown in the news in real life.

We used several cuts on during the film to show Mila's state of DID and how she is not a normal person. IF we wanted to portray her as a normal person then we would have used continuity editing.


Monday, 1 January 2018

Radio Trailer Script Feedback


My group and I received audience feedback since our first draft of the script. On our first update we were told that our script was not descriptive enough, for example, in our script we wanted the ambient sound rustling leaves and nature, we simply mentioned 'ambient sounds' we needed to be more detailed and show our audience what we want through detailed description.

Moreover in our first draft, we wanted the nursery rhyme 'Jack and Jill' to connote our protagonist's abusive life as a teenager in school which as led to her evil pseudo-identity looking to avenge her past. We later then changed the 'Jack and Jill' -with-a-twist rhyme to 'Ring-a-ring o' roses' because we researched that the song has a dark meaning behind it --it is a sordid children's based on the bubonic plague. We wanted the audience to understand that the antagonist has a sordid mind and her intention is to kill and destroy. From audience feedback from our target audience- they did not like the rhyme and at first they did not understand the reason behind the nursery rhyme which I had to explain.
We later listened to the soundtrack of the film Hanna, and watching the film we were inspired by the song The Devil is in The Details by the Chemical Brothers. As a group we decided that we wanted something similar to this song as the song emits an ominous/chilling vibe and atmosphere. We wanted to make our own version of this song with piano/orchestral music because orchestral music is the codes and conventions of a horror film.

Moreover, we included television static because the television is a big part of our film, when the news reporter comes and our protagonist watches the news, we wanted to include the sound of static when there is inference. Interference and static connotes confusion and disorientation.

We essentially conformed to many of the codes and conventions of horror films, including the screams, silence and music. Because we are dealing with a radio advert we want the audience to understand that our film belongs to the horror genre, specifically the psychological-crime sub genre. Also we wanted the narrator's voice to be deep and archetypal of a movie trailer narrator, the voice is loud and demanding is captures the audiences attention, it also anticipates the audience. The narrator also gives context of the film. We also use sound bytes from the film to give context, for example we include a sound byte of the news reporter Jake Simpson and included it in the beginning- this could trick the audience into thinking it is a real radio broadcast (this promotes verisimilitude and therefore terrifies the audience), however the "breaking news just in" is going to be a reverb, the second and third reverb the reporter is going to sound distorted to show the interference of static and also we did not want to mislead the audience to think it was a real report.

We include the audience by asking them "Everyone has a good and bad side. Which one are you?" Questioning the audience's morality we wanted the audience to think deeply about the question this will anticipate the audience to watch the film.

The Devil is in the Details:


Wednesday, 27 December 2017

Quick group meeting 7

This meeting was held to clarify which messages Mila would be waking up to in the film. We decided it will be these messages (shown below). However, there may be the problem of glitching on the scream or fuzzy lines if we record the actual phone screen. In order to avoid this, we would have to enter text on the screen in post production whilst editing.

Sunday, 24 December 2017

Improvements from initial 'ABE' analysis under research.

Through the planning and production of my coursework, I have decided to add additional analysis to the short horror film 'ABE' which I had analysed at the beginning of my coursework under research.

The short film follows many of it's genre's codes and conventions such as having low lit lighting, eerie music, death and blood.

The film starts off with a continuing sound of something that sounds like a wheel / car travelling in an empty hall. This sound is echoed whilst the opening titles appear on the screen. The opening titles follow conventionally of most horror films as they are on a black screen and slowly fade the texts in and out. The production company is shown at first, followed by the director and title of the film. How this can apply to my product is that we can start our horror film with a fade in from black and ambient sound of the atmosphere Mila (our main character) is in. For example, it would be a flashback of Mila stabbing one of her bullies, then it could fade into black and say 'A Dark Arts Production".
The opening titles in 'ABE' followed the 3 words per second rule as there were enough words to read in teh space of 3 seconds. The texts of the titles followed after each other after 3 seconds of display.

The eerie sound of the echoing builds up to a climax and sounds orchestrated. As the handheld shot of the footage of the blooded chains cut from one moving image to another, there are other instruments that enter the scene. For example, at 0.42 seconds, it sounds like an instrument similar to chimes. There are continuous cuts from the chain scenes which we used similar editing techniques in our production too. For example, the daily routine of Mila getting ready in the morning was full of continuous cuts and jump cuts show show that mentally, she is not steady and to connote that she is not a normal person. After the chime type of sound in ABE, it is then followed by the flutter of the moth as soon as the woman's eyes flutter open. 

This links with the scene where there is a high angle shot of the moth being sliced by the robot, it connotes that he will do this to the woman he has kidnapped. Additionally the sound links to the scene when he says human desires can all end in the "blink of an eye", with the diegetic sound of a slice in the air as he cut the butterfly without looking. This foreshadows the woman's death as she is being represented like a beautiful butterfly. There is also intertextuality in this scene as this may represent the same as 'The Silence of the Lambs', another horror movie but on a larger scale in all costs, timing and production.

Going back to when the woman wakes up, she sees that her mouth is taped and her arms and legs are strapped down to operation type of bed. She tries to scream but the scream is muffled. This is similar to our production as we have a scene of one of the bullies on an operating bed with tape on her mouth, and she cries, tries to scream and struggles. The wide and long shots used in ABE to show the angles of the woman trapped are similar to our use of camera work as we have had close up's of the bully's face to show her struggle and the blood on her forehead is visible like the blood coming down the woman's nose in ABE. We also sued the idea of chains to chain the bully up so that she doesn't move instead of strapping her down to the bed like the woman is in ABE. Here we have applied a convention as there are usually the props of chains in horror movies. For example in 'ABE', and in the movie 'SAW' which is visible when the main character is chained in a room with three other people and has to cut his leg free from the chain.


Although, in the shots in ABE the woman's hair was straight and neat but in our film we wanted to adjust her hairstyle and make is messy as we wanted to show that she had been kidnapped and stabbed / operated in the stomach. We used a white sheet to put on top of the 'stab wound' in which the blood leaked through to create realism.

There are clear narrative codes throughout 'ABE'. For example the clear binary opposites between human and robots. Normally, humans are the ones experimenting on robots but this film took a twist and made the robot end up experimenting on humans and their happiness. There are also binary opposites in my product as there are two identities of Mila, one good and one bad. Also, the victim of bullying is killing the bullies whereas in reality, the bullies would be hurting the victims. Although this is seen as a type of revenge in our narrative. 

ABE, like ours has a non-linear narrative. This is because there are flashbacks included at the end of the film of the robot looking at the woman with ginger hair that he has fallen in love with. In our narrative, there it is non-linear as there are flashbacks of Mila stabbing her bullies, and they come in forms of nightmares in order to confuse the audience. 

I believe both ABE and our film SENSELESS aim to confuse our target audience, as in ABE we do not know if the ginger haired woman is his next victim or previous victim, and in our film, we do not know if they are flashbacks or actual nightmares, but this is clarified at the end as the audience realise that they were flashbacks from when the evil identity took over Mila's mind and body.

Both are films also challenge Todorov's equilibrium theory as we start and end in a disequilibrium and there is never an equilibrium.

Tuesday, 19 December 2017

Research: SCORE: A FILM MUSIC DOCUMENTARY (2017)

Director: Matt Schrader
Cast: Danny Elfman, Hans Zimmer, John Williams
Release year: 2017.

I came across this documentary about the significance of sound and music used in films which was released in 2017.

What I learned from the documentary:

-In the earlier days, when film was first invented, music was seen as something to cover up the noise of the projector.
-Orchestra music was used for 'King Kong' which was one of the major scores that made the film successful. The sound was what made the film scary.
-David Arnold - using a room for sounds and instruments. They use a solar roof to allow them to have a certain amount of sound that they want. They also have over 200 mics in this acoustic room so they can choose which sound of how close or far away they want the sound from the instrument.
-There are different jobs in the sound and music art of the film industry, such as composers. These are the people who are mainly close with the director, as they have to sit with the director, listen to the director and the director has to listen to what the composer makes, as it it has to get across something that is in one person's ind but not in the other's. The example they use in this documentary is that of telling someone to imagine a forest, but people have different types of forests in their heads and not just one specific one.
-Action movies have a lot more music than others.
-The sound and music added in horror movies creates a sense of seeing more violence and horror than what you actually saw.
-Hans Zimmer took strings from a cello and made it sound like a guitar. On 'The Dark Knight' he tried to have a 'constant pulse' going on throughout to make it exciting.
-People are are song artists can also try to do the job of composers for some directors.
-"All your other work on film can come to nothing if you don't get the music right" - James Cameron, a director (includes Titanic).
-Not all music is orchestrated - the sketching scene in titanic was made by just a piano to create the emotional effect.

How does this help me with my coursework?

This documentary was useful in realising how important music is in creating a film, as it can determine how your audience thinks and can change moods in different ways. For example if you intend to create a funny scene in a comedy film and do not use the right music, the audience may not find the joke funny. For our horror film, it is crucial to get right what sounds and music we want to flow with our narrative and what instruments we should use in order to create these sounds. We may also need to consider how to orchestrate it on a low budget since we are low-budget producers as students.
When recording sounds, we may need to record more than one time and use different mics to get the sound just how we want it, but we can also use different editing software in case they don't sound right so that we can match it up with our footage.

The trailer of the documentary is shown below.

Sunday, 17 December 2017

Update on props & filming

Instead of using ropes for our second flashback scene we used chains which we borrowed from the Art Department in our school. This relates to our horror genre more because it connotes that Mila has psychological problems to be changing a person up to a bed. It also shows that there is no way for bully2 to escape and foreshadows her death.

Friday, 15 December 2017

Group meeting 6


Whilst preparing for our second flashback scene, we decided to use ropes to tie down the bully to the bed. This would make it look more like a horror movie as she would be trapped and wouldn't be able to move.Preparing for our second flashback scene



Thursday, 14 December 2017

Audience feedback on final poster layout






What I learnt: (in audio below)
How I will apply it to my final product: (in audio below)




Wednesday, 13 December 2017

Sourcing of Imagery


Sourcing of imagery from m_xch
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The initial idea of our poster was to show that there are two main characters and that they are the same person but with mental problems. We didn't want to reveal too much of the answers of the killer but we also wanted to portray the horror genre. The reason why we chose these photos is that it is of both the identities that our main character has, and the killer's face is shown at the end f the film but the audience do not know who the killer is until the end, and so we have kept this as an enigma code for our target audience.
The camera we used to take these photos was a Canon EOS 100D.

Trip to the Cinema to Watch the BBFC in Action

On the 11th of December 2017 we went on a trip to Genesis cinema to listen to the presentation from the BBFC and watch Justice League.
The BBFC presentation helped us to understand film classification better as we learned the differences between 15 rated, 12 rated and 12A rated films (show in in previous blog post under research).
How the BBFC presentation helped us determine the classification of our film:
There are scenes in our film which are rated an 18 simply because of the content shown, whereas the rest of the film can be rated a 15 like we had originally planned. For example, in our film we have a scene where the audience can see the knife being inserted into the body and out again - the whole process of the stabbing. This makes it an 18 rating as there is explicit violence.

How effective is the synergy between the poster, trailer and film for DC's 'Justice League'?

Image result for justice league poster
The poster is very colourful and optimistic. In this sense it's shown that nobody is left out and everyone can help to save the world which fits with their tagline, 'you can't save the world alone'. What also gets their target audience on the edge of their seats and full of anticipation is that the poster includes all the superhero's logos and signs, and in a clever way spells out the tagline with their symbols. This links with the trailer as all the heroes and main characters are shown in action at the beginning of the trailer. This grabs the audiences' attention and keeps them watching as fans would see their favourite heroes. The background in the poster matches with the beginning of the trailer after the industry and company logos are shown, where there is a pink sky and a big field. This connotes that the setting is somewhere that can be destroyed but then saved, and as it looks like a peaceful setting then this may be where the equilibrium is (Todorov). The trailer however doesn't go in the same sequence as the film which shows that Superman is alive at first (in the trailer) but in the film, he is already dead and then they find a way to bring him back alive. The movie shocks he audience as the trailer doesn't give away that Superman will come back alive and help the other superheroes to save the world.

 In our product and ancillary products, we can do a similar thing by not revealing that our main character is the killer of her two bullies. In our poster we could show this by not not including the faces of our two bullies as this would give away that they were murdered by the main character, if she was there too. In the Justice League poster, they didn't include Superman and the shock of him returning in the film made it a success. In our poster, we could show our main character but not the others so that it creates an enigma code and makes our audience want to watch the movie to find out what happens in it.
In our radio trailer we could start off with the beginning of a newscast to make it seem realistic but not give away any names, again creating an enigma code.
 

Tuesday, 12 December 2017

Final Poster Layout

Last draft poster:


Good
Improve
The concept
 
The blue hoodie being different from a conventional binary opposition of black and white. The two hoodies show the contrast in characters.
 
The tagline is catchy and the positioning of the title is good as it stands out
 
The background relates to the genre and plot.IT helps to recognise it as a horror genre.
 
We can see the faces
 
Easy to understand and it is clear.
Add a background image related to the genre and the plot of the film.
 
Maybe insert an image of a knife into the eye of the killer using PhotoShop.

 
THE FINAL POSTER CONSIDERING ALL FEEDBACK:

Final Script & camera shots


Monday, 11 December 2017

Draft Poster 2 & Feedback

What I changed about the poster based on the feedback from the 1st draft:
I added the age rating at the top right corner. I changed the font of the title and the tagline. I added out institutional information and logo. I tried to add a brick border.
Feedback for this draft:

Good
Improve
The concept and the binary oppositions
 
The two identities represented as one person
Doesn’t tell us who made the film
The tagline is catchy
Doesn’t tell us enough information of the film
Simple
No review comments
We can see the faces
The faces should have a bit more emotion to it, maybe to show how the two identities have opposing views and feelings.
Easy to understand
Add a background image related to the genre and the plot of the film.
 
Maybe insert an image of a knife into the eye of the killer using PhotoShop.

Sunday, 10 December 2017

Draft poster 1 & Feedback



This is our first draft poster for our short horror film. I asked a few of my target audience what they thought of it and many people gave us a variety of feedback. This poster has a plain red background with two of the same people, one with a black hoodie and one with a white hoodie.


Good
Improve
The concept and the binary oppositions
Show faces
The two identities represented as one person
Doesn’t tell us who made the film
The tagline is catchy
Doesn’t tell us enough information of the film
Simple
No review comments
Simple font, easy to understand
Add a background image instead of plain red background

Saturday, 9 December 2017

Potential draft poster?

I tried to create a potential draft poster (without all the details such as the company name and logos, credits) using PicMonkey.com and using the photos I took at the photo shoot with our actress.
I merged three photos together to try and make it look like our protagonists life is going downhill. I used Snapchat to send a video of the poster and explain why I positioned the faces the way there were (so that it her mental state could be represented and so that it shows her mind is distorted). A couple of my target audience replied unexpectedly and gave me feedback on this potentially draft poster and they helped me recognise some faults in the poster and gave me advice on how to make it look more like a psychological horror movie poster.

The reason why this potential poster couldn't have worked is because we could have included one faded picture of her smiling in the background instead to show that she suffers from manic depression and DID. The font also does not suit our genre as it looks more technical or like a sci-fi movie font.

Thursday, 7 December 2017

Risk Assessments


Final risk assessment from m_xch
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Monday, 4 December 2017

Animatic Storyboard


This is our animatic storyboard for out horror film. (Turn up the volume).
The process:
We divided the drawings into three parts: The beginning, middle and end. Mariam drew the beginning, I drew the middle and Noshin the end. As there is three of us in the group it was easier to divide and allocate parts.
We then took pictures of the drawings and used the Notes App to convert them into PDF files, then uploaded them to iMovie as we wanted to has an experience of how it would be if we were to edit real footage.
We want the audience to understand the significance the past has on Mila's (main character) Dissociative Identity Disorder (DID) and how it developed from being bullied so we included various shots of her taking anti depressant pills.
In the future we will use Final Cut Pro for our final product as it has more tools and effects, is well advanced from iMovie and I can develop my editing skills more.

Sunday, 26 November 2017

Group meeting 4

Planning our route to our first filming location and bringing the equipment we need




Saturday, 25 November 2017

Recces

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Our company logo

I created this logo for our production company. This was made using fonts influenced by the fonts on Dafont.com. The reason why I chose them was because when they are put together, it would look like this production company makes horror films or mysterious types of films which suits the aim of our project.

Tuesday, 21 November 2017

Draft Radio Trailer Script 2 with feedback

Edit: The Devil is in the detail - a similar tune that we will create to add in our trailer, as we cannot use the actual tune because of copyright*
Edit:
The Devil is in the detail - a similar tune that we will create to add in our trailer, as we cannot use the actual tune because of copyright*

Sunday, 19 November 2017

Radio Trailer script draft



Radio script draft:
 

Short sting fades in
Short sting fades out

News reporter:
Breaking news just in…

Bully 2:
(Screams)

Mila:
(Heavy breathing)
Young Mila (sings):
Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jack fell down and broke his crown
And jill came tumbling after

New reporter:
Two girls were brutally murdered.

Mila:
(Grunting and heavy breathing)
(Ambient sounds, BULLY 1 falls onto leaves on the floor. At this point Mila has pushed her and is about to stab her).
(Police sirens sound)

Young Mila (sings):

Up Jack got and fell once more
And straight to hell he went
Jill got up and took the kill
And joined Jack on his descent

New reporter:
Police are asking for help in identifying who the murderer is.

Bully 1:
“Please don’t hurt me, I’m sorry!”

Mila:
"Everybody has a bad and a good..."

Narrator:
"Senseless...
In cinemas November 16th..."
(Screams)